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12-03-2009
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hi, i've recently started writting songs and would like an outside opinion thks again you can leave me a comment on youtube or reach me at : galchr@msn.com YouTube - the game (original song) Christian Gallant) YouTube - neil young cover (Words). Christian Gallant YouTube - Buying Time (original song) Christian Gallant YouTube - Coming Home (original song) Christian Gallant YouTube - Understand (original song) Christian Gallant YouTube - My world my mind (original song) Christian Gallant | ||
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12-03-2009
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| Super Moderator  Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Canada
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Ok...well, after being flipped off by you in the third chord of the first song - hahahaha And are you in your open bathrobe in the second?...that kinda creeped me out a bit. Songs are ok, a little sappy for my liking and the weak, whisper voice I found gets old really quick...not that there's anything wrong with that, just not to my liking really, (personal opinion) Ok, I guess....didn't really blow me away or anything.
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12-03-2009
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| Masters  Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: AYRTON SENNA-RIP
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I am really not into this sappy stuff either but after listening a couple times, I feel a little different than MZ about the voice. I think it has some true character. Just sounds a little drab (only word I could think of) at times
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12-26-2009
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| Senior Member  Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Greater Toronto Area
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The voice sounds the way it does because of the microphones used. In the hands of someone who knows what they are doing, the positive qualities can be emphasized, and the negative can be eliminated (to some extent). As with anything, the more you do it, the better you get. However, there is one thing I personally think you can improve on, and that is your chord. Aside from Creep by radiohead and a few other songs, most songs with the same chord progression over and over are boring. The difference between your stuff and radiohead's is that radiohead has more band members who can compensate for an unchanging chord progression. Either way, with enough exposure I'm sure you would have fans. Try to weed out your bad habits and improve on your good ones. Good luck!
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