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    This song is still unfinished. But it's something I've been working on. what do you think of it so far?

    Verse 1:
    Get off your high horse
    Before I put you down
    No you ain't worth ****
    You're just like everyone else around

    You wanna be cool
    You wanna be the big man
    Well haven't you heard
    That this is no man's land

    Chorus:
    I won't cry this time
    Cuz you feed off my tears
    I won't run this time
    You breathe on my fears
    But I will stand my ground
    Build a thicker skin
    Oh you show such bravery
    But you're a coward within

    Verse 2:
    Go fix yourself
    Before you fix me
    You prey on someone else
    Cuz your life's a tragedy

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    This sounds like something I would write. Anyway, good job so far, I'd like to see it when it's finished.
    Last edited by SljSlj; 05-06-2010 at 11:52 PM.

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    I was just thinking maybe you should check out my song "No More Shame, Never The Same"... if you want. It's kinda the same sort of theme and I think you might you enjoy it.

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