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Thread: can someone help me write this song im writing for my demo it's called "my goodbye"?

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    Default can someone help me write this song im writing for my demo it's called "my goodbye"?

    this is what I have so far and you can edit it any way you like Im just having a hard time fininshing the song i've done like 5 takes and nothings working out. Thanks a bunch!

    There was a time
    when i thought i had it all
    you were my man
    and i
    i was women
    i never thought
    that this day would come
    when you'd say
    you're leaven
    and now your gone

    Good bye
    good bye
    this is my goodbye

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    Hey, u are upto a good start. However, do you have a tune in mind for the song u are writing?
    Or u are writing first and then u would make up the tune?
    Coz if u have a tune, i can help u easily with the song.. if not then also I can help thou..

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