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Old 04-26-2008
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Default New song I just wrote...let me know what you think of the lyrics?

Its called "A Rainy Sunday"....let me know what you think of the lyrics, and what they make you feel like....

Who will be there
When there’s nothing left to hide
When all our dreams fade
Into a midnight stare

And who will walk with you
When you’re broken down and beat
Can’t stand on your own
Who will be there

Tonight

Well will you walk alone
‘Cause you’re afraid to admit
That you need someone there
To hold you up

‘Cause tonight you’ll see me
For who I really am
‘Cause tonight I’ll be broken
One more time

I know you’re still there
You’re innocent like a child
You need to step back
And just breathe

And learn to live your life
Like you did before
You ever had a care
And set yourself free

‘Cause tonight you’ll see me
For who I really am
‘Cause tonight I’ll be broken
One more time


This song gives me a fealing of reflection...looking back on the past etc...but what do you think?

check out the actual version at myspace.com/chrisguitarman
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that is really good I love it, you r really talented!
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thats good.
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I'm sure girls will like it, but I don't. It's kind of wussy.
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I'm sure girls will like it, but I don't. It's kind of wussy.
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Gives me the feeling I don't wanna feel -- sadness. But this is really good.
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