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Old 04-26-2008
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Never Trust an Angel


She’s the girl that you’ve always wanted to be
She talks so perfectly
No flaws
Nothing obscene
She’s got everything you don’t
Has done things you won’t
But last night when she called you on the phone
You where shocked back into reality

She’s got a bad-boy boyfriend
He’s got a Harley Davidson
He’s slept with every girl in town
She’s living on the edge
Now she’s in his bed
Doing things her momma told her she ain’t aloud

She’s skipping church for that fatal jerk
Now she’s falling apart
The drugs she uses to forget
Her decedents and her doubt
He’s sweet-talking her back to his place tonight
And she walks real slow
Under the street lights
And in the cold hungry night
Looks like he’s gonna have some fun of his own

She’s got a bad-boy boyfriend
He’s got a Harley Davidson
He’s slept with every girl in town
She’s living on the edge
Now she’s in his bed
Doing things her momma said she ain’t aloud

She’s crying for attention
Now she’s left with nothing
And she’s filled with doubt
She’s a fallen angel
Broken and mangled
Lost and hoping to be found

Never trust an angel…
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Thats beautiful!! I love it! Your an amazing writer
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Its So-so it needs a little work but i dont really know many american songs but it sounds a little like Taylor swifts in the begging "she talks so perfectly" shes got everything you don't- Change that or you will be sued big time if you ever wanted to make it big- it pretty good i could make a tune for you on garage band
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Never Trust an Angel


She’s the girl that you’ve always wanted to be
She talks so perfectly
No flaws
Nothing obscene
She’s got everything you don’t
Has done things you won’t
But last night when she called you on the phone
You where shocked back into reality

She’s got a bad-boy boyfriend
He’s got a Harley Davidson
He’s slept with every girl in town
She’s living on the edge
Now she’s in his bed
Doing things her momma told her she ain’t aloud

She’s skipping church for that fatal jerk
Now she’s falling apart
The drugs she uses to forget
Her decedents and her doubt
He’s sweet-talking her back to his place tonight
And she walks real slow
Under the street lights
And in the cold hungry night
Looks like he’s gonna have some fun of his own

She’s got a bad-boy boyfriend
He’s got a Harley Davidson
He’s slept with every girl in town
She’s living on the edge
Now she’s in his bed
Doing things her momma said she ain’t aloud

She’s crying for attention
Now she’s left with nothing
And she’s filled with doubt
She’s a fallen angel
Broken and mangled
Lost and hoping to be found

Never trust an angel…
Basically the song is about a girl really looking up to someone she thought was the perfect role model
and then her perfect role model met up with some guy who basically has her trapped, and before you know it she’s getting high and sleeping with him all the time and she can’t get out. It’s a message to teen girls not to trust everything you see.
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what a beautifull lyric.....
i love it.... nice work.....
do you have mind to change your song`s title....? i still believe my angel..... anyway.... congratulation..... its greatfull.....
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that is really good.! it is a song that makes sense.
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i like it. but yea, it depends what music it'd go with. i like the lyrics though.
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its not a song dude, its lyrics, so because your question didn't make sense i'm not even going to read
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