i just can't find a tune!!!!
the song is called Forever

Chorus: I'll always remember you,
you will stay forever.
I will never let you go!
You'll always be next to me,
you'll always be in my heart!
No matter where life takes me,
no matter how many tears I've cry,
you'll be forever
i need HELP, not critisism

do you play another instrument? If not, then do you want it to be a slow song? Then start humming away and try to get a melody out of it.....if you want it as a fast song, pick the guitar up or a keyboard if you play and play different notes/chords and see what happens naturally....

hum something, try singing it. thats how i get tunes. im assuming you just have lyrics. how do you want it to sound? mabye pick up an instrument, but if you write music, you likely already do.

Don't bother finding a tune, that song is crap.