Of those I don't care for any of them except for Freddie Mercury.
I haven't heard gerard way or dave mustaine that I know of.
And the rest , from what i've heard , are very juvenile/not very deep/lyrical.
I don't "love" everything Freddie Mercury has written either but he was talented.
My favorite lyricist these days is Rob Thomas. I have yet to come across a song of his that I don't love. And I listen to everything of his i can get my hands/ears on

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I've always loved Stevie Nicks, and basically Fleetwood Mac lyrics because Christine McVie and Lindsey Buckingham (even his solo songs) are great lyricists too.
Bernie Taupin is amazing too.
I could go on...but those are the best i can think of atm.