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What do you think of this song I wrote??
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04-28-2008
Bela_?
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What do you think of this song I wrote??
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Why….Why can’t you just take a hint
More like a 100 thousand hints
All you have to do
Is look up into my-y eyes
Why can’t you see
I love you with all my heart
I just wanted you to know
To never leave my side
Why don’t you understand me
Why don’t you ever listen
You are so goddamn stubborn
But I love you anyway
I love the way you smile
I love the way you talk
If only you could see
I need you in my life
Please tell me what you think...................the good and the bad!!
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04-28-2008
Colette <3
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Well, I really want to say i like it, but I would put it in more of a poem place. Because, personally, to me, I think songs should always rhyme.
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