This is what I have so far - I wrote it all by myself. What do you think?

Every night in my dreams
I see you, I feel you,
That is how I know you go on

Far across the distance
And spaces between us
You have come to show you go on

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

Love can touch us one time
And last for a lifetime
And never let go till we're one

Love was when I loved you
One true time I hold to
In my life we'll always go on

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

There is some love that will not go away

You're here, there's nothing I fear,
And I know that my heart will go on
We'll stay forever this way
You are safe in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

No, this is all wrong! I mean, unless you want your relationship to become a sinking ship, I would seriously consider re-writing this! I give you points for effort but SURELY you can do better than this? I know you put a lot of effort into it, but it's just so terrible.
Throw this overboard and start over.

Wasn't that on Titanic?

u would sank the Titanic!

I wish I could feel like you. All my poems/songs are empty and depressing.

Its very nice man

EDIT: Hey wait a min. I checked those lyrics. They are Celine dions

I THINK THE TITLE OF THIS SONG SHOULD BE CALLED
AND MY HEART WILL GO ON AND ON.
I REALLY THINK THAT your words are in a repeating mode , , their is no story to this song except that your heart goes on and on lets take a look in the first verse youaresayng that in your dreams ise you and feel you , then futer down the track you are saying their is some love but in the in one of the verses you are telling us that you believe the heart goeson and on, I do believe you haveto get this song into some order , so that the public , know what you are saying

Such skill. I can only hope that this song is strong enough to breakthrough the ice berg that is known as your wife's heart.

omg..i thought celine dion was a girl